The endurance of love
July 19th, 2008 | by Vijayaraghav |
The endurance of love
Let me confess that once I loved you! I love you even now! The embers of my love still conserve the feelings but will not put you in distress once again The tenderness of your brimming love filled my life with passion but I cannot chase those beaming eyes now The rushing time swept our hopes and dreams to fill an abyss of oblivion Of all the torments with which our lives were crust we withered to realize our companionship Do you know still it rains in the kingdom of our memories Do you know the pine trees in my dreams still slumbers and sways I could endure my despair but failed to comprehend our fate

27 Responses to “The endurance of love”
By . Ramesh on Jul 19, 2008 | Reply
Beautiful poem sir, I still chasing
those beaming eyes in my every dream.
i liked the third last stanza very much. Take Care & Cheers.
By Anuchinta on Jul 19, 2008 | Reply
Nice words.
By Nishu's on Jul 19, 2008 | Reply
Beautiful poem…loved reading it…..
By * G U R U on Jul 19, 2008 | Reply
NICE WORDS ON LOVE…….THANX
By Madhu Vamsi on Jul 19, 2008 | Reply
wow sir very nice poem. loved it.
By . Miranda on Jul 20, 2008 | Reply
Mmmmm….my dear Vijay…love is in the air, I can smell this from here…the aroma of your words touch the door of my sensitive heart….Beautiful presentation!!!
By Rajiv S. on Jul 20, 2008 | Reply
Brilliant ! This is one good poem from you….you have a sensitive soul Vijay….Happy days.
By Sundari on Jul 20, 2008 | Reply
Do you know
still it rains
in the kingdom
of our memories these words are so true yes it does rain thoughts of another day and drench us no end..sunkan
By . on Jul 20, 2008 | Reply
Nice hearty work friend, but don,t leave every thing on the name of fate. Sometimes fate can be regulated nicely by our own hearty efforts. Already you may have been succeeded in reaching the goal if you tried best like your poems! You are now in the pres
By Preeti on Jul 20, 2008 | Reply
A unique love poem with words like endurance, distress, despair, torments..very interesting. Really enjoyed.
By Gopa B on Jul 20, 2008 | Reply
wonderful expressions .. just a little polish required.
By Idle Mind on Jul 20, 2008 | Reply
Perfect rendezvous with romanticism!! You rock with ur poems, indeed!!!
By Sojan V Jose on Jul 20, 2008 | Reply
beautiful verses.keep on rocking
By Dr Raj on Jul 20, 2008 | Reply
Touching words, indeed, though I confess I am a little out of depth with love poetry…
By Iona Lazar on Jul 21, 2008 | Reply
Love is like the trash of beast’s claw…bleeding. Love is like an angel’s wing…never touch.
By Muktadhara on Jul 21, 2008 | Reply
charged up my memories:)
By Anjali on Jul 21, 2008 | Reply
"Flowers are lovely;
Love is flower-like,
Friendship is a sheltering tree"
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Samuel Taylor Coleridge
By . Rashmi on Jul 21, 2008 | Reply
Love still remains in my heart as embers…beautiful.. could endure but couldn’t comprehend..touching …
By Swati . on Jul 21, 2008 | Reply
Beautiful piece Vijay ji…so touchy…so meaningful…full of thoughts and feelings..full of love and life…
By K. Rajib on Jul 21, 2008 | Reply
The poet is recollecting his past that was full of promises and commitment but the fate was something else to prove. thus the poet recollects those moments which were full of promise and all.
very well composed verse Vijay. Loved reading this.
By Vida Writer on Jul 22, 2008 | Reply
left me breathless again(in more than one sense…hehehe)
By ClickVista on Jul 22, 2008 | Reply
Very nice poetry you have indeed!! Love and kindness are never wasted. They always make a difference. They bless the one who receives them, and they bless you, the giver. I am NOT a Christain, but I like to read the Bible sometime, Love is patient, love
By Prasanna on Jul 22, 2008 | Reply
Hi,
Love knows no limit to its endurance no end to its trust, Love still stands when all else has fallen.Good blog to read…..
By Mt. F@!rY on Jul 22, 2008 | Reply
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By Nishu's on Jul 22, 2008 | Reply
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By InkTank on Jul 22, 2008 | Reply
wherever i go, its poetry time on ibibo:) nice work sir!!!
By Priya on Jul 23, 2008 | Reply
love is magic dear.nice poem dear,sorry 4 commenting late…EK SHER ARJ KIYA HAI..
kabhi kabhi koi apna anjan ho jata hai
kabhi kabhi kisi anjan se pyar ho jata hai
yea zarori nai jo khushi de usise pyar ho
dil torne walo se bhi pyar ho jata hai