The endurance of love

July 19th, 2008 | by Vijayaraghav |

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The endurance of love  

Let me confess that

once I loved you!

I love you even now! 

 

The embers of my love

still conserve the feelings

but will not put you in distress

once again 

 

The tenderness of your

brimming love 

filled my life with passion

but I cannot chase

those beaming eyes now

 

The rushing time

swept our hopes

and dreams

to fill an abyss

of oblivion 

 

Of all the torments

with which our lives were crust

we withered to realize

our companionship 

 

Do you know

still it rains

in the kingdom

of our memories 

 

Do you know

the pine trees

in my dreams

still slumbers and sways    

 

I could endure my despair

but failed to

comprehend our fate 

 

 

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  1. 27 Responses to “
    The endurance of love”

  2. By . Ramesh on Jul 19, 2008 | Reply

    Beautiful poem sir, I still chasing
    those beaming eyes in my every dream.
    i liked the third last stanza very much. Take Care & Cheers.

  3. By Anuchinta on Jul 19, 2008 | Reply

    Nice words.

  4. By Nishu's on Jul 19, 2008 | Reply

    Beautiful poem…loved reading it…..

  5. By * G U R U on Jul 19, 2008 | Reply

    NICE WORDS ON LOVE…….THANX

  6. By Madhu Vamsi on Jul 19, 2008 | Reply

    wow sir very nice poem. loved it.

  7. By . Miranda on Jul 20, 2008 | Reply

    Mmmmm….my dear Vijay…love is in the air, I can smell this from here…the aroma of your words touch the door of my sensitive heart….Beautiful presentation!!!

  8. By Rajiv S. on Jul 20, 2008 | Reply

    Brilliant ! This is one good poem from you….you have a sensitive soul Vijay….Happy days.

  9. By Sundari on Jul 20, 2008 | Reply

    Do you know

    still it rains

    in the kingdom

    of our memories these words are so true yes it does rain thoughts of another day and drench us no end..sunkan

  10. By . on Jul 20, 2008 | Reply

    Nice hearty work friend, but don,t leave every thing on the name of fate. Sometimes fate can be regulated nicely by our own hearty efforts. Already you may have been succeeded in reaching the goal if you tried best like your poems! You are now in the pres

  11. By Preeti on Jul 20, 2008 | Reply

    A unique love poem with words like endurance, distress, despair, torments..very interesting. Really enjoyed.

  12. By Gopa B on Jul 20, 2008 | Reply

    wonderful expressions .. just a little polish required.

  13. By Idle Mind on Jul 20, 2008 | Reply

    Perfect rendezvous with romanticism!! You rock with ur poems, indeed!!!

  14. By Sojan V Jose on Jul 20, 2008 | Reply

    beautiful verses.keep on rocking

  15. By Dr Raj on Jul 20, 2008 | Reply

    Touching words, indeed, though I confess I am a little out of depth with love poetry…

  16. By Iona Lazar on Jul 21, 2008 | Reply

    Love is like the trash of beast’s claw…bleeding. Love is like an angel’s wing…never touch.

  17. By Muktadhara on Jul 21, 2008 | Reply

    charged up my memories:)

  18. By Anjali on Jul 21, 2008 | Reply

    "Flowers are lovely;
    Love is flower-like,
    Friendship is a sheltering tree"
    -
    Samuel Taylor Coleridge

  19. By . Rashmi on Jul 21, 2008 | Reply

    Love still remains in my heart as embers…beautiful.. could endure but couldn’t comprehend..touching …

  20. By Swati . on Jul 21, 2008 | Reply

    Beautiful piece Vijay ji…so touchy…so meaningful…full of thoughts and feelings..full of love and life…

  21. By K. Rajib on Jul 21, 2008 | Reply

    The poet is recollecting his past that was full of promises and commitment but the fate was something else to prove. thus the poet recollects those moments which were full of promise and all.

    very well composed verse Vijay. Loved reading this.

  22. By Vida Writer on Jul 22, 2008 | Reply

    left me breathless again(in more than one sense…hehehe)

  23. By ClickVista on Jul 22, 2008 | Reply

    Very nice poetry you have indeed!! Love and kindness are never wasted. They always make a difference. They bless the one who receives them, and they bless you, the giver. I am NOT a Christain, but I like to read the Bible sometime, Love is patient, love

  24. By Prasanna on Jul 22, 2008 | Reply

    Hi,
    Love knows no limit to its endurance no end to its trust, Love still stands when all else has fallen.Good blog to read…..

  25. By Mt. F@!rY on Jul 22, 2008 | Reply

    Very well written and expresses your emotions completely… do visit my blog also

  26. By Nishu's on Jul 22, 2008 | Reply

    pls visit my post….its on Yahoo Games….

  27. By InkTank on Jul 22, 2008 | Reply

    wherever i go, its poetry time on ibibo:) nice work sir!!!

  28. By Priya on Jul 23, 2008 | Reply

    love is magic dear.nice poem dear,sorry 4 commenting late…EK SHER ARJ KIYA HAI..
    kabhi kabhi koi apna anjan ho jata hai
    kabhi kabhi kisi anjan se pyar ho jata hai
    yea zarori nai jo khushi de usise pyar ho
    dil torne walo se bhi pyar ho jata hai

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