By evocat on Sep 26, 2008 | Reply

You took me into my past. Vivid expressions. Want more. Rgds Raj

By Miranda . on Sep 26, 2008 | Reply

Loved your romanticism in your sensitive lirics…….Wonderf ul poetic piece my dear Vijay…..!!

By Vipul Gupta on Sep 26, 2008 | Reply

hey mr. raghav,

i am a former colleague of urz. i knew that u were a good singer but I am pleasantly surprised to see that u r a good poet also. keep it up.

By Tingtong on Sep 26, 2008 | Reply

The sky always looks down

through the eyes of stars

and the rain still falls

with subtle rythm
beautiful lines, vijay….

By Sojan V Jose on Sep 26, 2008 | Reply

beautiful lines……

going through your blogs after a long time…..

i just love your posts ..

tc…good luck blogging

By writer on Sep 26, 2008 | Reply

Then we parted
And the parting
Was imparted
To a world that departed
Little bothered as it bothered ’bout us,
Little did we know ourselves apart
Alas, we weren’t aware
That we were a part
Of one soul atlast!

By Vio Sno on Sep 26, 2008 | Reply

Beautiful !! The last five lines. Just luvd them.

By S U G A R on Sep 26, 2008 | Reply

You have beautifully described ‘milana -bichadna ‘ phase of life,some people leave an indelible mark in life , a vacuum never to be filled in …beautiful verses,very vivid ….Thanks Sir for your encouragement ,really appreciate it,regards,deepa

By Rajib Gurung on Sep 27, 2008 | Reply

Your conviction and lucidity in the expression is your forte . I love it. “I still carry your love

under the burden

of my solitude” these lines are wonderfully juxtaposed. There is integrity in the theme and no loose ends. thanks for sharing such a piece.

By Madhu Vamsi on Sep 27, 2008 | Reply

you are master in writing poems and hats off to you for putting up endless new poems…I loved the present write up of yours and thanks for sharing and inviting me to read it…

By Nidhi M on Sep 27, 2008 | Reply

life goes on despite everything………. v well written

By savita on Sep 27, 2008 | Reply

Your lines are always able to touch the strings of the soul. Feel short of words to describe my feelings. Regards.

By sonia on Sep 27, 2008 | Reply

Nostalgic journey …down the memory lane. From starting lives as newly weds with hope shining bright …….till date. One does get busy with other things as life carries on, some moments unconciously merge into the background. But it is never too late to pick up the threads and start again !! Some things never seem to change, as life goes on almost never following the same path. grt grt poem Vijay, pure pleasure to read and absorb. tc.smile.

By Rajiv on Sep 27, 2008 | Reply

“Rain still falls with same subtle rhythm”……….E xclusive and vibrant, only a poet can bejewel these words, and you have done it profusely,…….. You are superb !!!!

By Alka Jain on Sep 27, 2008 | Reply

No words. How beautifully you have described the irredeemable nights and the parting. Your emotions and feeling………..al l take my breadth away. But then life goes on……………I think i am spellbound. Great.

By S V on Sep 27, 2008 | Reply

“I always wanted

to return to the times

where we embraced eternity

and realised that

you are the rarest soul”

This thought is always helping us to move forward but to keep the past alive and the dream that we have sown and the pain we have within us to be our torch bearer of past to enlighten our future….
loved the poem.,,,

By Nishu's on Sep 27, 2008 | Reply

its a lovely poem………..but now the rainy days have passed by

By Idle Mind on Sep 27, 2008 | Reply

Nice and vivid expressions … and as your poetry rises beyond the nature, it took me into a pleasing rainy afternoon as well!

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By ansyton on Sep 28, 2008 | Reply

Beautiful nice touching poem…capable to stir the souls of soul mate.

By sonia on Sep 28, 2008 | Reply

True, it wd be difficult to forgive. I too echo similar thoughts.

The concept of marriage has undergone a change, especially in urban areas. The younger generation is impatient and does not really want to compromise. Divorces are happening over trivial issues. Living in is getting quite common. The western culture is here to stay. Feel it is the woman who is at a disadvantage in such relationships in our male dominated society. Thanx for ur words.

tc.

By Rakhi on Sep 28, 2008 | Reply

how one react to a poem?a poem which means a lot?it makes u so happy that for few sec u start thinking -o.k. let me salute the poet with some line of my own…..:)…alas,no t many can bring words to dance in their own tune……..its such a pleasure reading u sir……….my regards and wishes

By lalli on Oct 1, 2008 | Reply

what a pleasure to read ur lines vijay..very good..:) those last lines…simply superb.:)

By Rashmi on Oct 1, 2008 | Reply

The rhythm of rain brings back old memories..so beautiful and touching!!

By Anagha Pande on Oct 3, 2008 | Reply

beautiful lines and a very beautiful song on the rains..I love the rains..that makes it even more beautiful for me!