the unfinished symphony…




Author: Suparn@ | Filed under: My Life
(Vidyasagar Setu also known as second Hooghly Bridge, Kolkata) The wrinkled flesh shaped by summer, autumn, winter, and rain speaks of a life consumed by pleasure and pain. where tired eyes seek the fulfillment of countless unfulfilled dreams. the wrinkled flesh is preparing for the final curtain call. the wrinkled flesh, once roaring, now exhausted, seeks a calm shore. This is the last bow, the wrinkled flesh has moved beyond pleasure and pain in some obscure corner of a nameless mind, only a sepia image does remain.
A life filled with peals of laughter and seared by sorrowful screams
The heart is growing weak, on the spirit numbness does fall,
Like powerful waves peacefully die after striking the rocks with a roar,


54 Responses for "the unfinished symphony…"
lovely stark verses…suppie’s comet is back after 76 years with a bang
And you run and you run to catch up with the sun, but its sinking||
And racing around to come up behind you again||
The sun is the same in the relative way, but you’re older||
Shorter of breath and one day closer to death||"time" Pink Floyd
this world is so beautiful the life so enchanting that one doesn’t really like to think of any such thing but aging and eventually the death are realities we have to accept. the life therefore must be meaningful and enriching such that it prepares one for
Death has taken away the body,
May her soul rest in peace,
That’s all we can pray now.
hi suparn..gud morning.:)hmmm i really felt like this when i was in bed.:( thought i’ll never see u all..but what to do..hv to torture u all wid my blah..blah..;)hehehe jokes apart..wonderful verses suparna..yeah the glory of life beyond pleasure n pain..
The rockbaj comment was ‘fatafati’. May be u should join DA’s bandwagon … a post in rocking Bangla!! howz that?
How you manage to view life so close……
It is the time which keeps moving…..
Very nice photo…Very very nice…Sensitive words…
rather late but I am there again. every time I read u i find something new. good and keep on.
You did not say anything about the photograph…Its of a bridge I guess…Nice blog.
very ,very touching verses from a sensitive soul…what is life? hve recently witnessed death of a dear one and was lost for months ….tryg to make sense of life and death..ibibo gives me a surreal life ,today u brought it all back with this poem…
Nice post
Beautiful expression of life through a little poem. Nice one.
wrenched…by image and words alike…harmonising a moment when it all tend to tear asunder…but we transcend by our creative agency…and so will you…with the soft composure of a pain that is very personal…we care dear…love and best…
Suparna, ur words say what u feel.u r watching death as it comes to take away the life of a dear one..reading ur lines i remembered my mother, & how we watched her breath last,& today happens to be her death anniversary.
i know u r brave, take ca
oh yes..u r having a hard time..i guess. I have seen many a losses and i know how it affects. Hugs hugs. Btw..ty for ur wishes hon.
that was lovely suparna…beautiful epithets
as more im discovering u more getting amaged u got a very powerful imagination also ur writtings claim a very high status.ur extremely good in ur humour taste etc i adore u my lady.
can feel the pain.All ways with you.
beautiful lines
pain comes thru.v sad verses but touches the heart
Very touchy lines…….. dard bhare dil ke gam. U know what ? The lines "A life filled with peals of laughter and seared by sorrowful screams where tired eyes seek the fulfillment of countless unfulfilled dreams." matches with my own life. Ur l
Wow! first of all the pic is brilliant. I presume its the new Howrah bridge? Secondly, the poem is quite a serious and quite belies the fact that its written by a young lady. Mighty impressed my dear. Way to go.
Cheers
sad poem but honest i liked it a lot dear,great work
Like powerful waves peacefully die after striking the rocks with a roar,
the wrinkled flesh, once roaring, now exhausted, seeks a calm shore.
….hey hv faith in urself… frm the death of a wave a new wave actually is born…who is more stronger n mi
with so much pain in the verses ,it makes it special and close to heart,touching and thats the UPS of its….
Nice Picture! tHOUGHT PROVOKING POEM!
I feel the pain through every words. Great work by great soul ! May God gives you courage to fight against all odds of the life. God Bless You.
Mellowness in silence, quiet contrary to what it was on your last page, unexpectedly matured, full grown…well this page sure has formed mellow, serene melodic ripples in the shoreline…the one you seldom get to hear it…………..Happy days
brimming pain in each word….think positive always..
Why so much pain in ya Poem? BY GOD HOwrah Bridge looks amazing through ya snap
Nice one but why so much pain. Positive thinking always creates positive atmosphere.
as far as this particular poem is concerned i guess i know where the pain comes from……only a few can bring out pain the way u hv done…
Why, dear ? why thinking gloomy thoughts about aging ? Cheer up !
I am feeling weak Su…please help.
The inevitable brought out beautifully
cheer up ! Tumi ki Wordsworth hoye gele naki ?
I see it as a union with eternity … the boundless joy that no human has ever experienced on earth. If death is what we move towards, let the glory of life be united with the life beyond pleasure and pain. Incredible!!
Beautiful piece of poetry Suparn…and the pic is also very nice…
About past, present and future of human relationship and morphological changes that comes with the age. But there is serenity within etrnity.
Hi how are u doing??? my new post is read for u please visit and give ur comments..
You disappear! Why? Hae view on mylatest post
Welcome back Suparna
Are, kahan thi aap?….Kal, aaj aur fir kal ki or dekhate hue samay gujarata chalaa jaata hai!…very nice one!
ooh my!! i could feel death very near to me…. thank God i started chatting wiht a friend soon after reading this… ah i am alive…
well, the pic is very well placed…but what is it? the howrah bridge?
Thats well written but I am really intrigued by the photo. Where is this?
Welcome back Suparn@ :D,hope all is fine now!! Yes,u were missed !! Poignant verses here,pain is showing through…all ok,i hope?? Thanx and yes,zor ka jhatka dheere se laga….aur aaisa laga,that the mouth remained shut…:D!! tc and smile.
hey supran, i was hiding behind the camera!
Wah … Wah … Wah, so poetic!!! Madam we require poets like you to open the minds of our stupid politicians. And if you ever write your own book comprising of poems please let me know. But before I buy it I will have it autographed by you. With best wis
Very poignant & sorrowful, but a fact of life….everyone & everything that has been created has to take a last bow sometime, anytime….beautifully written..
The heart is growing weak, on the spirit numbness does fall,
the wrinkled flesh is preparing for the final curtain call.
y so much pain….let pain be so much that it give rise to a new day with the sunshine of happiness …may my prayers b listened
i just want to tell u sorry..this is my new profile..my 2nd birth..next thursday is my bday…and i want ur friendship as a gift…i m sorry once again….Good afternoon..written a poem..do visit…and this is nisha ur old friend…God gave me punishment.
hi supran, what a beautiful poem it is. We need people like you to get rid of this rubbish politics..keep it up buddy.
hi how are u doing??? My new post is waiting for ur comments…
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